4/30 8:40 am - Great concept for this commercial! Showing a time change through a variety of camera shots, position changes, and scene changes was well done. The editing that took place was precise and well done. I would say try and incorporate some additional camera shots to change our perspective to keep the engagement.
3/8 8:40 am - I really like the idea of keeping the Chex Mix in the same spot in the frame and having the cuts show different activities. That's a nice premise for the commercial. I do think that some of the shots linger just a bit too long, like the one of you studying. Edits in commercials ideally should be a little snappy and quick to help sell the product. You did a better job of this toward the end of your video, though! Nice work.