BOYCP Boys Swimming - ID# 509
Back of the Yards College Prep
School Promotion Sports
Entry Description
A short promo for the boys' swim team.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/4 8:46 pm - I like how you had the team cheering at the end, but I think I would have started out with that. The video was a little bit shaky in the beginning. You had some good shots of a single swimmer close-up that was well-done - I would try for more of that type of shot - clear and crisp with a better hold on the camera. Maybe then try to get the same style with your other shots - even of the team - more close ups of them cheering one another on, helping each other out of the water, etc.... I would finish with BOYCP Boys Swimming and your School Logo.
- 3/4 10:53 am - Looks like a good time, but we need more camera shots and cuts, especially to match the speed of the swimmers and the music you chose for this video. Also, we don't know what school this is for...add in graphics, logos, etc to tell us so we can cheer them on with you!
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