After School Wolf - ID# 537
Back of the Yards College Prep
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
A student falls asleep in class and wakes up to find a wolf chasing her through the empty school.
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- 4/30 3:46 pm - You do a great job making a lot with a little here. The mood and ambience add a lot, and the balance of horror and comedy is done well. Good camerawork and editing. The acting is good and believable. The story is not totally clear - is this a dream, or is there really a monster in the school? That might not be important, though, because the humor works, and the ending joke is great. The way it ends does feel slightly unfinished, even though that cut is funny. Overall very entertaining.
- 4/30 3:21 pm - The punchline for this film is hilarious. I like the concept. Most of shots were a bit too long. It would help if they were shorter to help build the suspense and keep the audience interested. Great job!
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