Makeup Tutorial - ID# 540
Shepard High School
Demonstration
Entry Description
how to become a simple makeup artist
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- 4/8 9:16 am - Your makeup tutorial has good lighting and a nice use of text for each step. To further enhance the video, consider including close-ups of each product to provide viewers with a better look and understanding. Switching up camera angles will also help keep the audience engaged. While the directions are clear, adding dialogue to explain each step would be beneficial and provide more context.
- 3/1 4:30 pm - All the steps work and the on screen graphics tell us what one you are on...but for a demonstration video it is usually good to give us some more details about what you are doing in each step. Talk us through the application, the blending, etc. This category allows entries up to 3 minutes and you are only using half of it. Again, what is here is good, but to go from good to great you've got to dive in deeper on the steps. Additionally, the camera shot you chose to use was in focus and showed us everything we needed to know, but again to go from good to great we need more camera variety. More angles, more shot sizes. With make-up, close-ups really helps to show what you are doing and what the end result will be. I am guessing you shot this with just the two of you, and again it is good, but if you revisit this idea with a few additional steps you can make an exceptional video. Unrelated to the video...nice work on the make-up (and nice work on the video too).
- 3/1 8:17 am - Good use of text throughout the video. Music selection works well with the images you recorded. Keep producing more videos.
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