Join Yearbook - ID# 62
Elk Grove High School
School Promotion
Entry Description
Yearbook activity promotion video.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/24 9:27 pm - Good way to promote joining the yearbook staff. A couple of suggestions...song level drops noticeably at 6 seconds, which is a couple of seconds before the sponsor speaks. Hide that with a fade out right as the sponsor starts speaking. Speaking of sponsor, I think you'd "sell" this more with student participation on screen. What does yearbook mean to them? Definitely don't want the subject holding a mic. Use a boom, lapel or simply hide a mic somewhere.
- 3/4 12:53 pm - POSITIVES: Good framing of your interview subject; audio quality is good. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: You've picked a quiet location in a hallway to film. But the "Story" only covers the basic details of where, when and who, but doesn't show the collaboration, camaraderie and relationships that YEARBOOK is really about. And it's not about the sponsor, it's about the students, isn't it?
- 2/19 1:15 pm - -Good rule of thirds -Feels more like a class project than a competition piece -Try a boom mic or a lapel rather than her holding -Cuts abruptly -Song was a bit loud/distracting
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