OFFSZN - ID# 63
Lyons Township
School Promotion Sports
Entry Description
This is a school promo clip for the Football playoffs. All original footage, all compositing, effects, and titles created were created by me.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/4 9:47 am - Great video with excellent editing and graphics, but the viewer would have no idea what school or team this is for. If the point of the video category is to promote, this video misses the boat on that. Sure where you post it can help let us know (an Instagram handle, a YouTube page, etc), but many viewers simply watch on mute and scroll on by...so give us the details in the video. Team name/logos, date, time, etc.
Judge 1
Positives: I liked the use of the text for the song lyrics and putting the font in different places on the screen. And concurrently the video that swerved as the bed had action moving in the directions that worked well with the font (if that was a conscious choice as opposed to blind luck - good job!)
Improvements: What was this promoting? Could not tell just by watching. Could have been a bit longer 10-15 seconds by the time I could wrap my head around it, the piece was over.
Judge 2
Positives: Clips were well lit and composed. Opening graphic built onto the screen well and was synced with the music.
Improvements: Story was difficult to follow due to how the text was composited. The flashes and placement made it unclear where to look. Duration was too short. Expanding closer to 30 seconds would give the story more room to develop.
Judge 3
Positives: - The video editing was strong, good highlight clips to work with and put together in a cohesive manner.
Improvements: - There wasn't anything about this video that really said 'PLAYOFFS' to me. Personally, instead of putting the song lyrics on the screen I might have focused on the messaging around the team/game/matchup, etc.
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