Failure: A Love Story - ID# 69
Maine South
School Promotion
Entry Description
A school promotion for Maine South High School’s Fall play, “Failure: A Love Story,” a comedy by Chicago Native Philip Dawkins that follows the story of Nelly, Jenny June, and Gerty Fail as they live above their family clock repair shop before their time unexpectedly runs out.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/25 11:12 am - You did a great job with the pacing and edit of the video. The audio is mixed well as you transition to different songs and natural audio. I enjoyed the rehearsal footage of the play which gives the viewer a glimpse at the work that is put into the performances. Overall, this works as a good social media promo for the play!
- 4/24 8:54 pm - STORY: Overall, this is a well planned promo for the play at your school. However, I do think with the specific substance in your video and the length of your video, it would work better as a horizontal video rather than vertical. Was this intentionally made for social media? If so, make a festival version that is horizontal! SOUND: I think you did a great job mixing your music bed with the sound from the overall performance! CAMERA: You used a variety of different shots and angles. I appreciate the mix between close ups and medium to wide shots. It adds a nice touch! LIGHTING: Great use of lighting in the setting that you filmed! EDITING: I think you did a great job with pacing overall! I think the cuts to the beat of the song also work very well! I do feel like some shots were too short on screen specifically at 0:24-0:28. I think your intention was to cut to the beat of the music as well as the performance, however, it was hard to process what was being shown in these shots.
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