GTV is a daily news program produced by Media Production students
Positives: This newscast showcasted a variety of news styles – anchors delivering announcements, a news package on busing, a sports report and a remote weather update. This made for a well rounded program. Focusing on a day in the life of one bus driver was a strong storytelling vehicle. Finding a unique angle like you did - instead of presenting a broad overview - is more engaging. This package also featured some creative b-roll.
Improvements: The newscast could benefit from some enhancement and polish in the production values. The nat audio in the sports report ended abruptly a few times. More importantly, creating a dynamic graphics package with a consistent theme and adding in some video and audio transitions would create a more cohesive and professional product. Again, you had a nice start with the unique angle to the bus driver story. Adding a reporter with voiceovers would’ve helped convey information and adding some interviews with her students or co-workers would’ve added variety. I would’ve liked to see more in-depth reporting like this package.
Positives: Good open with video - i think it's great to tell audience what's coming up/ Bus story was well shot. a lot of information in this show.
Improvements: Minor points - the sports anchor was shot way too wide and the lighting could be better on her.
Positives: Anchors (Julia and Layla): School Branded Attire: The use of school-branded attire shows cohesiveness and helps reinforce the school identity, which is a nice touch. Crawl on the Bottom of the Screen: The crawl is a stereotypical yet effective newscast feature that helps keep the audience informed, adding a professional element. A Day in the Life of a Bus Driver: Establishing Deb on the Job: Great job establishing Deb in her work environment. This helped set the scene well for the audience. Footage and Audio: The use of plenty of footage and relying on Deb’s audio to drive the story was effective in giving the segment authenticity and keeping the audience engaged.
Improvements: Anchors (Julia and Layla): Audio Issues: Around 3:05, Layla’s audio doesn’t seem to be picked up by her mic. Ensure the audio is checked and levels are consistent throughout the broadcast to maintain sound quality. Sports Shield with Addison: Audio Levels: The audio levels for Addison don’t match those of Julia and Layla, which can be distracting. Make sure the audio levels are consistent between different segments for a smooth viewing experience. The library background is busy and can distract the viewer. Consider using a simpler background, like closed curtains, or tighten the shot to reduce the amount of open space around Addison. The use of text to highlight when events are happening is a good addition, as it makes the segment clearer and more engaging. A Day in the Life of a Bus Driver: Additional Element: Consider adding another layer to the story by interviewing a student who rides Deb’s bus regularly. This would provide a fresh perspective and make the story more well-rounded.
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