Marist Life - ID# 75

Marist
School Promotion

Entry Description

A compilation of scenes around the school created to promote the school and entertain fans at home games on the video scoreboard.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/24 9:20 pm - Some cool, engaging shots throughout. Music works. A constant visual of red throughout too. All great! It does appear as if a number of people contributed footage to this...perfectly fine...but you want to make sure the quality and conceptual look are the same throughout.
  • 3/4 12:52 pm - POSITIVES: Wide variety of activities and aspects of student life are featured, using a variety of locations. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: A wide variety of types of cameras and orientations are used, with a distracting variety of black bands and sometimes only vertical orientation, as well as changes in video resolution. If using multiple people for sources, perhaps only use cellphone video to create some consistency. The Story is there, but the execution is really inconsistent. Music ends abruptly--edit that just the way you would a video clip.
  • 2/19 1:12 pm - Quality of footage felt inconsistent Nice pacing
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