This episode of BHS-TV represents some of the program's best segments, school promotion and celebrates the community while sharing news and updates.
Positives: Jersey Swap is a very creative idea. The fun b-roll shots of the student-athletes posing in front of the lights, the energetic music and dynamic graphics showed strong production values. Great effort collecting so much b-roll for the Winter Wonderfest package and the photos from the veterans’ service.
Improvements: Your packages would have benefited from more storytelling. Adding a reporter and more interviews could have been used to tell the story of how Winter Wonderfest is put together or why it’s special to attendees. A reporter would’ve helped segue between the interviews in the veterans piece. Few news programs are just a string of news packages. Have the anchors deliver some school news, a sports report or weather. A variety of news elements will help create a more well rounded program.
Positives: excellent choice of stories. the package on teachers who are veterans was excellent and could be done at every school. also, great choice of characters in both the veterans and the sports stories. camera work and sound were first-rate.
Improvements: the anchors were very good but sounded a bit scripted. this might be a case where they would be better off in some of their intros by going off notes instead of a script - it might make them more conversational. also, while i loved the creativity of the sports package, there was a little too much friendly trash talking - "my sport is harder than your sport." May have been better if, for instance, they asked each other what's the toughest thing about your sport?
Positives: Things That Worked Well U.S. Military Veterans Story Engaging introduction from the hosts. Jersey Swap Story Interesting concept with strong potential. Snippets of pictures with sound effects add a nice touch. Cool visuals in the opening. Overall Well-done camera shots and concepts.
Improvements: Things That Could Be Improved Hosts Add natural banter to make delivery feel less rigid. Show expressions and acknowledge each other while speaking. Winter Wonderfest Story Interviewee should look at the interviewer, not the camera. Quick cuts between interview and b-roll feel disjointed. Story loses focus—consider interviewing event staff for more context. Some shots feel random and not intentional. U.S. Military Veterans Story Alan Nolan restating the question slows pacing—cut directly to response. Slow zooms on interviews feel unnecessary. Limited images of interview subjects—following them around could add depth. Background music is too strong—lower volume or remove it when multiple people speak. Jersey Swap Story Introduction is too long—tighten this section. Interview lighting is too dark. Camera angles should capture both individuals and cut between them as needed. Purpose of the jersey swap is unclear—hosts should explain it. Background audio makes it difficult to hear interviews—adjust or remove. Overall Unclear who created each piece—consider having hosts introduce the reporter or adding credits. Storytelling needs more structure—focus on key points for clarity.
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