Winter Wonderfest! - ID# 80
Barrington
School Promotion
Entry Description
This segment captures the fun and exciting community event at Barrington High School, celebrating the holiday and winter season.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 10:10 pm - Great choice of music, some nice shots. I think you need to spend a little more time explaining exactly WHAT Winter Wonderfest is. I get that it's a celebration of the arts during the holidays, but what exactly happens, how does it work? Change up the length and type of shots throughout too.
- 3/4 11:57 am - POSITIVE: Strong opening sequence with logo. Steady camera work. Nice variety of activities in your B-roll. The interview explains the event well. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: Dominated by long shots, with only a little variety, even when you set up the shots. Jumps from the interview to B-roll too frequently. Use her at the beginning, then cut to your B-roll with her audio as VO,and only cut back to her at the end of her spot-- it's not that long, and the extra jumps are distracting and unnecessary. Random B&W shot @ :32.
- 2/18 1:24 pm - -Accurate, clear message -Good variety of footage
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