Ella's Commercial - ID# 81
Geneva
Commercial
Entry Description
"Ella's" a favorite Italian pub in Geneva, IL
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 6:11 pm - This was a very strong commercial! You had some great camera shots and angles to showcase the delicious food! Your dialogue was a bit drowned out by the background music, so make sure to take a look at that in your next video! Keyframe those decibel levels to make level gain. You also had some blank dead space at the end, so make sure to eliminate that for future videos.
- 2/26 2:21 pm - I really like this and how it showcases the entirety of the place! The food looked delicious, and I can tell the place has a lot of character by the voiceover. I would say though that the voiceover sometimes gets drowned out by the background music, and just be aware that there's 30 seconds of blank screen at the end of your upload. Otherwise, clean commercial that gets the job done to advertise this place.
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