Jersey Swap - ID# 83
Barrington
School Promotion
Entry Description
In this segment two varsity athletics swap jerseys, discuss their teams, their similarities, differences and laugh while sharing their perspectives as student athletes.
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- 4/24 9:54 pm - Cool concept, some nice shots. However, I think this may be entered in wrong category. It's over the time limit and I'm not sure what it's promoting. It's more of a package for a newscast or sports show.
- 3/4 12:58 pm - POSITIVES: Humorous segment that draws attention to both sports, and features playful banter between the 2 athletes. Some of the in studio B-roll is interesting. AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: DQ-- too long = 3:15. Max is 3 minutes. Poor audio quality of the off-mic questions detracts from the rest of the segment. Some of the B-roll that's included should be cut--this might be a stronger segment with less of the fluff b-roll, and only keep the strongest clips. The discussion of how many bruises each athlete gets goes on way too long.
- 2/19 1:28 pm - Not sure what is being promoted Interesting concept though!
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