Girls Lacrosse - ID# 84
Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description
This is a hype video showcasing the Girls Lacrosse team at Glenbrook South.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 1:39 pm - Editing is good, although the effects are a little disorienting. You did a great job including game footage between the individual player shots. The video is cut well to the music! The video seems to end kind of abruptly? But overall, good job!
- 4/18 2:10 pm - STORY: You do a great job providing clips of players and gameplay to tell your story. Your video definitely creates excitement around the team! SOUND: I think you did a great job mixing your music into your video. Something that would be a great addition is actually hearing some of the sounds from your clips of the games. It would be nice to hear players communicating or audience reactions/cheering. CAMERA: I really like how you include game footage. I think that adds to the overall feel of making this a hype video. You include a lot of different shots of the athletes as well and it demonstrates a lot of your skill and creativity. LIGHTING: You demonstrate some interesting lighting techniques in your video! I really like how you used lighting on the athletes for their close ups. One thing to watch out for is the lighting at 0:01 of the three athletes. It looks like the left side of their faces are just slightly overexposed. EDITING: You use a lot of stylized effects and transitions which really do make this feel like a hype video. I do feel as though there are too many light leaks appearing on the screen, at times. Specifically from 0:14 to 0:24. I feel as it sometimes takes away/distracts you from the action happening in the game clips. However, I realize that this is a stylistic choice.
- 2/29 9:07 pm - Love the live lacrosse footage along with the video of each player. Great job with lighting and filming.
Judge 1
Positives: Exciting music and student friendly selection editing style had a music video feel
Improvements: Not much of a "story" - introduction of captains? seniors? unsure who As a stand alone - need more narrative - could work as an intro into something else
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Judge 3
Positives: Excellent execution of shots that define the Girl's Lacrosse team at south. Those shots demonstrated the power of Lacrosse as well as the comradely demonstrated by the team's players. The editing was excellent. Many of the action shots were cut on a beat of the music which helps to develop the power of the team. The speed changes that occurred during some of the shots was a clever touch.
Improvements: There isn't a lot I would suggest to change. The opening shot has a soft red glow over the players. Is that the best choice since the team color is a dark blue?
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