Disability Etiquette - ID# 85
Elk Grove High School
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Entry Description
Julia Korzen, a student with cerebral palsy, goes over small steps that students can do to make life easier for students with disabilities.
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- 4/30 2:24 pm - The opening and closing shots feel a little crowded with text, but it kicks off strong by clearly showing what not to do and how to fix it. The point of view shots and obstacles are interesting to watch, though the message gets a bit unclear at times. Shortening some shots and mixing up the angles could help keep the viewer focused while still keeping that light tone that works well. Great job highlighting an important subject matter.
- 4/28 1:01 pm - Your video had a lot of great information and some fantastic visuals, particularly with the POV shots and the various obstacles. Nice work with the message and the music choice, light-hearted but also giving a clear message that’s easy to follow. Moving forward, I would cut your shots a little shorter and change the shot angle / type, so move from a wide shot to a close-up to a medium shot instead of one long POV hallway or classroom shot. This will also tell your audience what to focus on or pay attention to or, as a director, bring focus to the most important visual. Keep up the good work!
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