Field Hockey - ID# 85
Glenbrook South
School Promotion
Entry Description
A short hype video full of energy meant to showcase the state-winning Glenbrook Field Hockey team.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 1:57 pm - The beginning of the video was very well done! Editing, transitions and effects were used consistently and well throughout the edit The fonts and song all fit together nicely. I wish the field hockey clips were a little shorter with some crowd or other b-roll clips to help hype it up more. Overall, great job!
- 4/22 10:23 am - STORY: I think your video definitely feels like a hype video. You give the audience information about your players and then you wrap up your video with some gameplay! SOUND: Your sound was adequate. I think your audio was not peaking and you used some sound effects to enhance your edit. I think you could have added more sfx to add to the hype of your video. For example, some cheering, teams yelling or announcer during the gameplay footage. Some extra sound would be nice to hear during the player close ups too (if the team has a chant, or some other sfx). CAMERA: You use a variety of camera shots throughout the video. I do like the shots you used at 0:16. It was a smart move to make the cuts between players and team consistent. I feel like some of the gameplay footage is repetitive in terms of camera shots. It would be nice to see a shot of the team happy/cheering after scoring on the field. We don’t see any of that. LIGHTING: You use lighting effectively throughout your video. You definitely include creative lighting techniques that enhance the energy of your overall video. EDITING: Great use of the graphics at the beginning of the video to introduce the captains of the team! You do a great job cutting to the beat and using sfx between clips of game footage. The sfx goes well with that old tv effect that you incorporate. Very well thought out!
- 2/29 9:10 pm - Love the effects of this and like seeing a sport like girls field hockey being showcased in MMEA! Great job showing each player and I like the way you used this song to showcase the team.
Judge 1
Positives: Exciting opening with "electric" editing Musical style matched editing some great field shots
Improvements: More narrative to show score/update action the style wore on me by the end with the "fuzzy" nature of the shot
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Judge 3
Positives: Great selection of dynamic shots. The edit captures the camaraderie and proficiency of your team. It's full of energy and creativity. The choice of music supports your theme.
Improvements: There are only a couple of suggestions for improvement. The first is to make it clear that this promo is for Glenbrook South. For example, I live out of district. So, I am not familiar with things like school colors, etc. Since GBSTV is credited, it looks like this is a promo for the South team. And, it looks as if your team took state this year. If that is correct make sure that is included in the video. Overall, excellent work!
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