EG Nation News Promo - ID# 86
Elk Grove High School
School Promotion Non Sports
Entry Description
A promotion video to promote EG Nation News, the Monday announcements show at Elk Grove High School.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/30 3:13 pm - I could not view this entry as Google would not connect with the source.
Judge 1
Positives: -Strong editing, synced nicely with the music track! -Creative concept to showcase your school with the right dash of humor. I'd definitely remember this!
Improvements: -Bobblehead was slightly out of focus in a few of the shots. I probably wouldn't have the very first shot be out of focus since you want to put your best foot forward (unless you rack focus to show it's intentional) -It'd be nice to have a transition into the title card at the end, like a dissolve or quick fade to black. Feels abrupt.
Judge 2
Positives: -The creativity of the idea was awesome! I like how it was edited on the beat of the music. -I really liked how each shot changed perfectly with a different background, but the same mascot bobblehead. The transitions were clean!
Improvements: -Make sure the lighting stays consistent from shot to shot so it’s not jarring for the viewer. -At the end, when the photos are stacking, make sure each edit has a clear purpose. One suggestion would be to select four strong photos and fill the screen with them for a cleaner, more intentional finish.
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