Football Documentary - ID# 88
Barrington
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
Intro to football documentary
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- 4/24 10:33 pm - This piece had some beautiful shots and fun, high-energy editing, visually, it’s really engaging! That said, it feels more like a sports highlight reel than a movie trailer, which might make it a better fit for a different category. To shape it more like a documentary trailer, consider adding interviews with coaches or players to provide context and a sense of story. That added narrative would help guide the viewer and give the visuals more emotional weight. Lots of strong work here, just needs a clearer format to match the trailer category. Great effort!
- 4/24 9:16 pm - I think seeing interviews or narration from the documentary would help make this feel like a trailer. As it is, it feels like a promo more than a trailer for a documentary because we are not seeing a story, we are just seeing football and commentary from the games. Are there some great shots? Yes, definitely. Does it flow well. Yep. But we have no idea what the documentary is actually about.
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