EG Media King of the Hill - ID# 89
Elk Grove High School
School Promotion Non Sports
Entry Description
Elk Grove Nation News promotion for its Monday announcements, done in the style of the King of the Hill parody.
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- 3/9 1:22 pm - Fun use of the music and timelapse always make for some fun footage. However, since it's all timelapse, it feels one dimensional...especially since we only see one person really moving around the studio. My big question is...what did you want people to do after seeing this promo? Join the production staff? Watch your newscast? I'm just not sure what your call to action is because it is neither stated or implied.
- 3/4 9:15 am - Recognizeable music caught my attention and drew me in and fit the vibe of the time-lapse concept. I guess my only criticism would be that I wanted to see more of the "chaos" and movement of what goes into your announcements? Control room, camera people, scripts, etc. Part of the likeability of what you've done here is given the viewers something that they wouldn't otherwise get to see unless they were on set with you guys. There's a lot that goes into a broadcast, even daily or weekly annoucements. Letting your audience see more of the behind the scenes-- even a time lapse for :30-seconds and what goes into the hard work you guys do would have maybe embeded some urgency for your audience to pay attention to your broadcast. That being said, I liked this, the music fit, the vibe was frantic and fast paced and I think it achieves what it's supposed to. A little more variety would have really sold this for me.
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