GET UP - ID# 9

Glenbrook North

Public Service Announcement

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Entry Description

A PSA showing the commonality and convenience of deciding not to get out of your room.

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: 1) camera work 2) overall story concept

Improvements: 1) needed a website reference at the close 2) this may have worked better as a :30 psa

Judge 2

Positives: Editing change going from the gaming environment to the active environment and back was very well done. The raising of the blinds was one action that conveyed a LOT all at once - along with the shots of the sneakers showing the character debating internally about what to do.

Improvements: I didn't love the music choices for wither the middle or the end section - didn't feel they were in proportion with the message of the spot. Character could have conveyed more enthusiasm in face and expressions to give separation with the gaming section - this is why getting up (and out) is good.

Judge 3

Positives: 1) The pacing of the edit was great and easy to understand the storyline. 2) The dark room vs bright beautiful outside was a good artistic choice in terms of storytelling.

Improvements: 1) Would love to know why it is bad to have too much screen time. We don't see any consequences. 2) Would be good to include resources for someone to look into.

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