Turning of the Blade - ID# 94
Maine West
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
This is a trailer for "Turning of the Blade," a story about revenge, loyalty, and failure. Coming this fall to a theater near you!
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- 4/29 1:23 pm - Strengths: Editing the light sabers - having the one return to the character, adding in the key sounds for the sabers, the glow of them and when they light, etc., worked well. It seemed like time was taken to get that part right and it worked well. Shot variety - there is a nice variety and selection going on that shows us who is in the story and gives us more of the setting. Improvements: Story-wise, it's a little hard to follow. The characters both know why they are there, but the audience doesn't. I assume nothing, so going into, even if it looks like a familiar story, we don't know who the characters are. Establish a little bit more in your trailer on who they are and why they are fighting each other. Revenge, for what? Failure of what?
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