This video guides the watcher through the process of making a white chocolate based decoration. This process is made up of easy-to-follow steps, making for an easily replicable tutorial.
Positives: The elements in the video all play into the story - the music underscores the bright upbeat energy and the "ingredients" list is a clever way to present what supplies are needed. The steps are well paced - each graphic holds for long enough to be read but not too long. The camera angles clearly show what is being done.
Improvements: A small thing, but the stop motion style used in step one could be carried out throughout the entire piece for greater stylistic cohesion. The use of dissolves hint at this, but sometimes cuts off a step. The music compliments the mood of the piece, but to take the sound a step further, the use of sound effects such as scissors cutting would further enhance the action happening.
Positives: -Nice use of upbeat music to drive the pace
Improvements: The ingredients portion was a little tough to read. -Without narration, I'm not exactly sure what I should be paying attention to.
Positives: Great demo. I appreciated your passage of time shots and text overlays. Animations lended nice visual interest.
Improvements: While text and music are nice, we missed the gift of your voice. How about some shots transferring the toppers from the parchment paper after all that hard work? Where did the sprinkles come from? We saw you at the beginning. A shot of you to close would have been consistent.
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