Chocolate Chip Cookies - ID# 97
Lyons Township
Demonstration
Entry Description
This is a demonstration video of how to make chocolate chip cookies.
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- 4/24 8:23 am - You included all the ingredients at the beginning which is helpful to someone wanting to cook it. You included a nice variety of shots and movement as well. The music was relaxing and didn’t take away from the story. The voice over was good at the parts you used it, but the on-camera sound was echoey and could have benefitted from using a mic. Or if you did use a mic, adjusting on set and/or doing some mixing of it in editing. One other suggestion would be to include a mise-en-place of the ingredients. But, again, you listed them all at the beginning which was good!
- 4/1 1:05 pm - Your audio sounds “echo-y” - use either a boom mic or a wireless mic for your audio to avoid that. Also, that will help with the audio edits. Some of those audio edits need to be a bit softer - either add a dissolve to the beginning of them or some type of linear fade in and out to soften them up. The b-roll for this demo was overall good. I liked the shots of looking into the oven while the cookies baked. Nice job.
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