The Truth - ID# 99
Maine West
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
What happens when a secret serum invades a vocal audition? Find out in "The Truth."
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- 4/30 4:27 pm - Funny concept and great script. I think having a shot of the assistant giving her the truth serum at the beginning rather than would've made it a little clearer. The shots were a bit long. Faster paced editing would help with the comedy. Great job!
- 4/21 12:11 pm - Interesting location and lighting. Overall good production design. At times the editing could have been a little snappier. This might have worked really well with a series of fast-cut truths blurted out one after another. The concept is funny, but it didn't quite build up to a disaster. The graphics were unnecessary and added a little amatuer-ness, as did the hand-written Truth Serum prop. Fun to watch.
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