1st Place

Bittersweet - Animation: Stop Motion - W

Lyons Township

Animation Stop Motion

Entry Description

"Bittersweet", produced by Katrina Nilles. White board mania, hand drawn using dry erase markers. A contrast between nature and urban life.

Judge 1

Positives: Very impressive. Your animation is great. You have a natural sense of timing. The motions were all about the right length of time. The animation was articulate. The driving scene work extremely well. Overall great work!

Improvements: Try working a little cleaner. Make sure you clean up all of the marker strokes that aren't a direct part of the animation. - Despite that you still made a great project!

Judge 2

Positives: I'm left totally speechless. Fantastic on every level.

Improvements: I can't think of anything.

Judge 3

Positives: pleasant use of the white board... interesting music...

Improvements: consider adding other sound effects for some of your high points... the ending feels a bit abrupt with both visuals and music... try another idea and see how it works