Bronze

When You Gotta Go - Humorous Narrative - W

Lyons Township

Humorous Narrative

Entry Description

"When You Gotta Go" is an original comedy sketch produced by Mac Koziarz.

Judge 1

Positives: Good angles and facial expressions. I liked the drop in of the cellphone angle as well.

Improvements: I think this was shot and edited pretty well, but a few scenes could have been cut a bit tighter. I also felt this lacked a bit of a plot, it was more of a "situation."

Judge 2

Positives: I liked some of the camera angles. Color balance, lighting, and audio were all fine.

Improvements: The editing was abrupt in the earlier sequences. Let the shot breath a little before the next. They shot sequence felt doubled up. The subject matter was just on the edge of unacceptable. The end punchline saved it. Heavy language and gross humor can be edgy or just plain not good.

Judge 3

Positives: Very funny and well done...great facial expressions on the main character...lighting, editing, shots all super

Improvements: All very well done