Bronze

 

Texting in School

Oswego East
Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA discourages students from texting in school. This shows that deans, administration and teachers are always watching like "big brother."

Judge 1

Positives: You demonstrated the use of various scenes, shot types and music to help tell your story.

Improvements: Next time, to improve your PSA, bring further clarity to your overall message. Keep up the good work.

Judge 2

Positives: You used sound creatively to shift the mood and create a comedic affect. I like how you conveyed your message in a humours way.

Improvements: The editing could have been paced better. Your video was funny, but it didn't explain why I actually shouldn't text in school.

Judge 3

Positives: Over all a very creative idea for the video. I liked the music in the background it made it seem suspenseful.

Improvements: White balance and lighting needs a lot of work. Some of the cuts were very tight.