This PSA discourages students from texting in school. This shows that deans, administration and teachers are always watching like "big brother."
Positives: You demonstrated the use of various scenes, shot types and music to help tell your story.
Improvements: Next time, to improve your PSA, bring further clarity to your overall message. Keep up the good work.
Positives: You used sound creatively to shift the mood and create a comedic affect. I like how you conveyed your message in a humours way.
Improvements: The editing could have been paced better. Your video was funny, but it didn't explain why I actually shouldn't text in school.
Positives: Over all a very creative idea for the video. I liked the music in the background it made it seem suspenseful.
Improvements: White balance and lighting needs a lot of work. Some of the cuts were very tight.