Bronze

The Phone that's a Must Have

Eisenhower

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial about the #1 phone to have.

Judge 1

Positives: Good story plot and great cooperation with actors.

Improvements: Audio needs to be consistent with all actors. Have product name on phone to demo. Viewer is unsure what to purchase.

Judge 2

Positives: Comparison of product features was evident. Scene selection was ample.

Improvements: Audio was fuzzy and featured an echo. Better editing could have helped in the flow of the content of the commercial

Judge 3

Positives: Contrasting the two phones was a good idea to help sell your product. pacing and editing worked for me.

Improvements: Audio level issues, and the paper on their desks looked liked a script. Immediatly took me out of the commercial.