Bronze

The Stalker

Eisenhower

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A young man who has a mysterious caller who constantly calls and won't tell who he is until he finally reveals himself.

Judge 1

Positives: some interesting camera shots

Improvements: confusing plot. short piece at 1.5 minutes

Judge 2

Positives: Use of music helps build suspense, creepiness. Lighting effects increase fear factor.

Improvements: Audio is a little uneven, sometimes a little too loud. Not sure if the guy getting cold meant that the caller was a ghost or supernatural, causing the place to get cold. Perhaps a little more dialogue, one more call to heighten the fear.

Judge 3

Positives: Story concept is realistic Dialoge helped to build tension

Improvements: Editing could have been more consistent...clothes kept changing