3rd Place

An Odd Walk

Batavia

Animation Stop Motion

Entry Description

A man is transported through a portal to another planet and befriends an alien.

Judge 1

Positives: Excellent animation. Good sets. The ooze was very effective. The jumps into the hole made by the ooze were very well done. Interesting story told with visuals only. Very nice work!

Improvements: Consider using an occasional closeup of the reaction of one of the characters.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice and smooth animation. Simple but effective backgrounds, and props.

Improvements: Not much of a story. Why did the character suddenly have eyes and a mouth at the end?

Judge 3

Positives: Very clear idea which you've worked well. Smooth movements. Nice well-done animation.

Improvements: Color is a bit intense, that wasn't necessary. Your thinking about sound dropped off a bit in the middle... remember audio is as important as your visuals.