At Eisenhower, there has been some mysterious things going on and the students have no clue on exactly what it is.
Positives: Liked use of sound effects.
Improvements: Audio editing was rough. The content did not give a good feel for the plot.
Positives: I liked your sound effects on the VO. I was able to understand the plot and cast in a very quick 30 seconds. Good job!
Improvements: I did not like the back and forth between black and white and color. I felt your camera work was a bit basic and felt rushed. More of this could have been shot on a tripod or jib arm, etc. Plan your shots.
Positives: Visual structure / composition was good. FX on voice was good.
Improvements: Sound editing was lacking - overmodulation, difference in levels between shots. Concept for story seems pretty standard horror material.