2nd Place

Let's Draw

Eisenhower

Animation Stop Motion

Entry Description

A boy and girl are seprated by an infinite glass wall. The only way they can play is to draw.

Judge 1

Positives: Interesting concept. You have some nice animation. The characters are effective.

Improvements: The story seems rushed at the end. Hold on the last two images longer. It's hard to see what happens to your characters.

Judge 2

Positives: Fantastic animation, and character designs. Wonderful story. Music fit perfectly with the edits and pace of the story.

Improvements: The few bits of quick cuts at the end was confusing, and didn't fit with the rest of the piece.

Judge 3

Positives: Very nice work with your well-designed figures. Good pacing till the end. Pleasant music.

Improvements: Hold some of the background scenes longer. You built well to your ending, but I wanted more to happen either with the drawings or their relationship.