2nd Place :: Division A

Holdin On

Neuqua Valley

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

The story of a happy couple and how their love is tested when Noah finds out he has cancer. Ivy visits him every day in the hospital until eventually his mental health diminishes. When Noah dies Ivy goes back to his house to reconnect herself with him, and finds his personal journal. While reading the journal she finds out that there was another girl he was writing to.

Judge 1

Positives: Great choice of music. Video is clean and works well. Editing and pacing used fits topic. Good use of Graphics.

Improvements: Content and Organization could have been better.

Judge 2

Positives: Great edits! Good pace. Liked the slight slow-mo effect. I felt the need to see even more and want to watch this! :-) Camera work was good. You paid attention to creative and composition.

Improvements: Some of the shots seemed to go from a nice "soft-effect" to a more crisp look. Kind of threw me a bit. Watch your exposures. A few were a bit over and washed.

Judge 3

Positives: Great concept, original story idea. Set up of events in the trailer is told exceptionally. Well done.

Improvements: Technically, some of the shots were sub-par, over exposed or too grainy. Narrative set up, while effective could've been a bit shorter.