Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A janitor is trying to get into the school after hours. He keeps hearing noises and is confronted by the "shadow"

Judge 1

Positives: interesting opening montage.

Improvements: quite short--minute and a half

Judge 2

Positives: Looks like you've got the film noir look going well for this project. Audio of shadowy character realistic and frightening.

Improvements: Good start but this seems more like a scene from a larger video, than a complete piece standing on its own. Greater length and substance needed.

Judge 3

Positives: Lighting worked well Sounds added strong sense of danger or anticipation of danger

Improvements: Stronger set up in the beginning.... Addition of erie music to the sounds