2nd Place :: Division A

Saga Outerwear Commercial

Neuqua Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

This commercial displays a couple products from Saga Outerwear company and the possibilities of the equipment. I recently acquired new stabilization techniques that I both made and purchased. This video was my first time using the camera table dolly and I experimented a lot with it.

Judge 1

Positives: Camera shots looked professional and the clarity was great.

Improvements: Watch audio consistency and transitions mixing two different shots which can be confusing for the viewer.

Judge 2

Positives: Great concept to create appeal for the product! The visual imagery was EXCELLENT, using a variety of shots.

Improvements: Sound seemed soft in some parts of the commercial. Head shots could have been executed with more detail.

Judge 3

Positives: Excellent visuals, editing, and sound design. Clear and concise presentation of the product and advertising idea. Was definitely a big fan of the dolly shots. Very good.

Improvements: Maybe a bit more action towards the end. Could have maybe used a tag line.