Bronze

Imality

Riverside Brookfield

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

A world where reality and imagination collided for countless centuries, but when a human mortal came, everything changed forever.

Judge 1

Positives: Creative concept. Good use of music and narration.

Improvements: Story was hard to understand. Some of the shots had poor lighting not sure if that was meant for effect but did not appear to be the case.

Judge 2

Positives: Decent pace through the entire spot. Your editing kept it moving along.

Improvements: Please watch your exposures. It felt that you shot this in auto focus and auto exposure. Image quality is just as important as the creative. Watch the shakey camera. Remember, is there a "reason" that the shot is "handheld". I am not really sure what this movie is really about.

Judge 3

Positives: High concept idea, original. Good shot composition, framing

Improvements: While idea was original, difficult to understand just what was supposed to be happening. May have been the intention but the result is too confusing. Could use additional locations - understood that character is contained in a certain area but all shots look like school halls.