Silver

Radon

Riverside Brookfield

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA expresses the serious dangers of radon gas by telling the story of Barb Sorgatz, a radon survivor.

Judge 1

Positives: A well produced piece with a simple and creative approach. Good use of an interview and storytelling.

Improvements: Keep up the good work.

Judge 2

Positives: Using someone who actually experience the dangers of Radon was effective. The script you used got your message across well.

Improvements: Consider using B-roll or close ups of the product she is holding to keep visuals fresh. The song was slightly too loud.

Judge 3

Positives: The coloring and lighting of the video was well done. The content of the PSA was well thought out and a good choice.

Improvements: The video seemed to stay on the wide shot for a long time. I would use wide shots less and closer up shots more. It would have been nice if this video had some B-Roll. Shots of the house when talking about the about the Radon in her house.