Bronze

Amo La Pizza - Animation: Computer - W

Lyons Township

Animation Computer

Entry Description

"Amo La Pizza", produced by Katy Marino. Hand drawn frame by frame, using a stylist pen/Bamboo tablet. The little pizza maker is busy at work until something mysterious happens.

Judge 1

Positives: Great pizza chef illustration. Fun idea.

Improvements: Technically - use more inbetweens. This will cause the animation to be much more articulate (smoother). Story - Consider developing the story more.I.E. Instead of throwing the pizza off screen only once have him throw the pizza off screen several times. Show different phases of development each time it returns. Each time the pizza leaves screen ingredients magically appear on it. Finally, use the ending you currently have.

Judge 2

Positives: Cute story, and character design. Motions potentially work well.

Improvements: Increased frame rate would have helped immensely. As it is, the animation looks stiff and unnatural. With a few more added frames here and there, with an increased frame-rate, the piece would have flowed much smoother.

Judge 3

Positives: nice character design good music idea nice range of shots

Improvements: Pacing of the film is a bit slow... speed up the motions