"Rubik's Cube", a stop motion animation produced by Seamus Coughlin.
Positives: Very nice motion. Your animation moves very smoothly.
Improvements: Develop a story based upon the cube. Create the cube's world.
Positives: Smooth animation.
Improvements: Five seconds... really, that's all you could do? No sound, no music, no nothing. It's just kind of there, waves at you and leaves before you can admire it or even enjoy it.
Positives: Hmmmm.... why enter this? Seems like you were just filling an assignment. Have some fun with it.
Improvements: Give me a variety of shots, build to something, don't waste your time with an incomplete film idea.