"Dinner Time", produced by Alex Kiessling. 100 card hand drawn, start with a line & end with a line morph. Who ends up eating whom?
Positives: Very nice animation! This project should be longer. You have a great style. You are starting to use animation principles like squash and stretch (fish). I hope you pursue this type of animation. If you have a little time watch some of the films of John and Faith Hubley like "Windy Day,' "Moon Bird," of "The Hole."
Improvements: The project is too short. You have a unique style of animation that requires more screen time. Great work!
Positives: Fantastic animation. Character's showed weight and moved very nicely. Great idea, with different animals eating each other.
Improvements: Would have been neat to see how long you could have kept this idea going. Far too short. I really wanted to see more.
Positives: Excellent smooth animation for a short idea. Good values, color.
Improvements: Work the story a bit more. You draw well and could compete a much longer and more developed film.