Bronze

How to Juggle - Demonstration - W

Lyons Township

Demonstration

Entry Description

How to Juggle, produced by Alex Lillquist.

Judge 1

Positives: The editing was good and the reverse motion when the balls bounced back up to the juggler's hands was effective.

Improvements: The open sequence was too long considering the short length of the overall video. I also felt the yelling sequence wasn't funny ... humor can be tough to pull off in a video.

Judge 2

Positives: The demonstration was good. There was some good camera shots of the juggling.

Improvements: Use more variety of shots in the opening montage. I understand the desire to be funny but the frustration angle could have been done more creatively.

Judge 3

Positives: Good editing. I like how you cut all the close ups together. fun concept.

Improvements: It took way too long to get to the step by step part of the video. Make sure all your shots have coog white balance and exposure.