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St. Regis Deer Valley - Commercial - W

Lyons Township

Commercial

Entry Description

This is a commercial for the St. Regis Hotel at Deer Valley Resort. Produced by Michael Kappas.

Judge 1

Positives: Soundtrack and detailed info about the the product's offerings

Improvements: VO and branding needed at the end.

Judge 2

Positives: I want to go. Some nice shots of the property and surrounding area.

Improvements: Need a better voiceover, something a bit more compelling. Some good shots of the property, but too many. Less editing and linger more on some of the beauty shots. In a way you are selling a fantasy and some of these images need more screen time to register.

Judge 3

Positives: Good job of showing all that the resort has to offer.

Improvements: The handheld camera shots are a bit jerky. A tripod would have helped. Editing could be quicker.