Bronze

Gone

Riverside Brookfield

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

This is a movie trailer about something that happens within a dream.

Judge 1

Positives: Opening graphic worked well.

Improvements: Audio was weak. Some of the actors were hard to understand. I did not get a feel for what the movie was about.

Judge 2

Positives: The pace was good. It kept the video moving. Good choice of music.

Improvements: I did not care for many of the handheld shots. I thought they were just to shakey. Compositions on many of the shots did not feel right. Watch your exposures and color temps.

Judge 3

Positives: Looks like it is a creative concept / story idea. Graphics / FX are good.

Improvements: Sound editing was weak, lots of noise, hard to hear dialogue. Narrative was disjointed - couldn't tell what was supposed to be going on.