Bronze

The Race Is On - Commercial - W

Lyons Township

Commercial

Entry Description

"The Race Is On", a commercial for the Business Professionals of America National Conference in Indianapolis, Indiana. Produced by Paige Marogil.

Judge 1

Positives: video quality and editing

Improvements: Did not tell me anything "about" the conference. Spent too much time "selling" the destination of Indianapolis.

Judge 2

Positives: Some great cinematography and very well edited. I like the opening sequence, preparing for the conference.

Improvements: Not sure what the "race" aspect is all about, could have used a bit more info about what is actually happening during the conference

Judge 3

Positives: Good music selection, use of stock footage.

Improvements: For a spot called "The Race Is On," this felt a bit slow. It could stand to be trimmed down, and the edits could be quicker.