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Christmas Ornament - Commercial - W

Lyons Township

Commercial

Entry Description

"Christmas Ornament", a commercial promo for the LTTV Christmas Ornament, produced by Camille Suknovich. Submitted to the Chicagoland High School Video Festival 2013.

Judge 1

Positives: short and simple

Improvements: better shot of ornament on the tree before the end-tag

Judge 2

Positives: Rack focus on opening shot

Improvements: Include some people, ore of an emotional connection

Judge 3

Positives: Shot selection and editing were very nice. I liked the dissolves.

Improvements: I wasn't really sure what the product was. What is LTTV?