Bronze

Computer Doctor

Riverside Brookfield

Demonstration

Entry Description

A how-to show demonstrating how to install internal components inside the computer. This is a highlight reel of all six episodes.

Judge 1

Positives: Good production open although staying with the open for 30-seconds is too long in such a short overall piece. Easy to hear and understand the narrative.

Improvements: At times it was hard to see exactly what was being described. There could have been stronger continuity in the narrative, a slightly better flow from step to step.

Judge 2

Positives: Your use of graphics was helpful. The closeup shots of removing/inserting components was good.

Improvements: I understand that this is probably a montage of snippets from a longer show, but it's hard to follow. I would have preferred if you had picked a single task (remove/replace RAM chips or removing a CD/ROM drive) and submitted that. The program introduction is nice but a little long for a demonstration video.

Judge 3

Positives: Shots look very good. Well composed very clean. Graphics are really good also.

Improvements: This didn't really have one specific direction. It was just bits and pieces of several modification for you pc. I felt you really needed to focus on just 1 and be very detailed on what you selected to upgrade.