Gold

 

Device and a Sacrifice

Homewood-Flossmoor
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie trailer made for a student produced short film.

Judge 1

Positives: Like the use of the MPAA rating graphic and studio title which helped set the mood for the trailer. Red filter effect and use of graphics added to the suspense. Great choice in music. Great piece would like to go see the short. Good job.

Improvements: This is being picky but the push of the button near the end was not made clear if that caused the explosion. I probably would have re-worked that section but overall great job.

Judge 2

Positives: Great graphics! Great choice of music.

Improvements: Pace started out a bit to slow for me. Watch your exposure and color temps. Some shots seemed to be "tack" sharp in focus, then the next shot was soft.

Judge 3

Positives: Great shot composition / editing. Good narrative / story development.

Improvements: Spelling mistake in final title page. Some of the "serious" shots featured actors smirking/smiling - not believable.