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Paper Beats Rock - Movie Trailer - W

Lyons Township

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

This is a trailer for the feature-length comedy "Paper Beats Rock". Produced by Lino Mogorovic.

Judge 1

Positives: Very Funny Spot. Well edited. Video quality is consistent.

Improvements: Needed more of the story.

Judge 2

Positives: Good fast paced action in the edit. I like the action. Creative camerawork. Great attempt at special effects,(guns,baseball bat smack down)

Improvements: I am not really sure what this movie is about. Think of who,what ,where,when,why. Watch your focus. Your camerawork is actually very good. Your many slips in focus did not seem intentional and were a bit distracting.

Judge 3

Positives: Music /sound mixing was good. Visual effects / graphics were good.

Improvements: Concept of the story cannot be determined from this trailer. Too much random violence, not sure for what purpose.