In Marnie Krtizman's powerful short film, blindness insulates a young woman from a turbulent world.
Positives: interesting premise. great music
Improvements: where did you obtain the war stock footage? conclusion
Positives: Good childhood scenes to establish character's life history. Good use of music to help set mood.
Improvements: Uneven sound quality. World death and destruction sequences could probably be shorter or with quicker edits.
Positives: The writing was very effective. Extraordinary story. Use of visuals added strength to the story.
Improvements: An interview from the mother's point of view might have added another dimension to the story.