Bronze

Youth Homelessness - PSA - W

Lyons Township

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This is a public service announcement about youth homelessness. Produced by Mick Martino.

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of black and white shots to emphasis your message, in addition to a number of provided still images.

Improvements: Next time, improve your visual storytelling by obtaining the highest quality audio capture possible, especially voice-over. In addition, consider making your still images fit to the full screen, without stretching or distortion. Keep up the good work!

Judge 2

Positives: Your script was well organized and conveyed your message effectively. The images you used matched up with what you were saying well.

Improvements: I would have liked more video instead of still images. Don't feel the need to always shoot in black and white.

Judge 3

Positives: The script was well thought out and flowed nicely. Showing actual patrons of the covenant house was a nice touch.

Improvements: The overall audio seemed very low. The black and white shots are very flat and need more contrast.