3rd Place :: Division AA

Fatal Retribution Movie Trailer

Waubonsie Valley

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie trailer for the film "Fatal Retribution"

Judge 1

Positives: Pacing worked well for the preview. Nice effects on the gun shots.

Improvements: I did not get a feel for the story behind the preview. Needed to include more dialog along with the action scenes.

Judge 2

Positives: Great music! Good pace. The editing overall was very good for me. Fast moving! Exciting! Nice gun effects.

Improvements: Some shots that were handheld, maybe could have been shot on a tripod or just less shakey. Watch your exposures. Overall, they were good. But, a few bad ones can spoil the whole bunch. Just a note (I did not judge based upon this) I assume you gave notice of your shooting with "guns" in certain locations to keep people (and police) aware of what you are doing? Did you have permission to be on the tracks? Be careful, please! You could get in big trouble.

Judge 3

Positives: Sound FX / editing was great. Good choice of music. Chase scene edit was good.

Improvements: Didn't get a feel at all for what was going on in the film except for people chasing each other w/ guns. The chase scene was good but too much for a short trailer, needed additional story elements.